SoTPoetry - an unseen swamp
socks of lead
Through an unseen swamp I tread. With feet wrapped in socks of lead. Sluggishly walk while tripping on roots. With socks stuck in mucky boots. Booted and stuck. Rooted in muck. Treading through an unseen swamp. Booted and stuck. Rooted in muck. Tripping on roots while I walk. Slowly I pull…stuck. Slowly I pull…muck. Slowly. Sluggishly I lift…no feet? Sluggishly I lift…concrete. Sluggishly. Unseen swamp, I tread on through. Socks of lead, feet wrapped too tight. Tripping on roots, sluggish I walk. Mucky boots, stuck to my feet. Sluggish…filled with concrete. Sluggish…are those my feet? Sluggish. An unseen swamp, I can’t get out. Feet stuck on roots, I can’t call out. Slowly…I’m stuck. Slowly…I sink. Slowly. This unseen swamp…
What is the poem about?
Sadly, how my feet and lower legs feel most days. They drag and suck as though stuck in this unseen swamp with muck and twisting roots.
All I want? To get through the swamp and feel my feet free again…yet, I know I can’t get out of this swamp.



My mom suffered horribly with chronic pain. Your poem reminds me of the off and on of items she would put on her feet, wrapping, unwrapping to obtain relief. God bless you.
As a reflexologist who works with people with fibromyalgia I totally love this poem. It describes the stagnation I feel in their feet and why I feel deep compassion for them.